tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post1210107849805315870..comments2024-01-11T06:16:31.534-06:00Comments on Lyrical Pens: Secret Santa Contest WinnerUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-2924916411938411052014-01-18T06:56:29.475-06:002014-01-18T06:56:29.475-06:00Great O'Henry ending, Lydia! Maybe you could s...Great O'Henry ending, Lydia! Maybe you could stretch out the reader's enjoyment at the end by giving "obsession" a descriptive phrase or two--not to outright say what Cynthia's involvement is in the incident, but a reminder for the reader of who she is. Congratulations!Kathleen Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06836793296793377680noreply@blogger.com