tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post6579741081912522083..comments2024-01-11T06:16:31.534-06:00Comments on Lyrical Pens: An opportunity to pick apart my writing . . . Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-52292522481710848982017-05-05T15:51:09.463-05:002017-05-05T15:51:09.463-05:00cj Sez: Ahhh, Music to this writer's ears. Tha...cj Sez: Ahhh, Music to this writer's ears. Thanks for taking the time to read this and for your feedback. Very much appreciated. cj pettersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10057216983469158184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-53173064094536162802017-05-05T14:45:46.442-05:002017-05-05T14:45:46.442-05:00Well, I was so pulled into the story that when I r...Well, I was so pulled into the story that when I ran out of chapter I said a very unladylike word (which I won't repeat per your instructions to keep comments clean). I wanted the story to keep going.LD Mastersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01202135756299574972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-25626561591994514122017-05-02T12:24:06.604-05:002017-05-02T12:24:06.604-05:00cj Sez: Thanks for reading the excerpt and for com...cj Sez: Thanks for reading the excerpt and for commenting. Helps a lot to have others evaluate the work.cj pettersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10057216983469158184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-21862736315347001212017-05-02T10:21:58.047-05:002017-05-02T10:21:58.047-05:00Strong protagonist and plot in first five pages. H...Strong protagonist and plot in first five pages. Hurry up! I want to read more.Mahala Churchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07875388836562975935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-84453954046550755402017-04-30T19:36:37.543-05:002017-04-30T19:36:37.543-05:00cj Sez: Thanks for stopping by and taking the time...cj Sez: Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read the piece...and many thanks for the encouragement. cj pettersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10057216983469158184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-55054890291802249592017-04-30T19:29:06.253-05:002017-04-30T19:29:06.253-05:00I find it powerful and entirely enticing. I am cur...I find it powerful and entirely enticing. I am curious about what comes next. It is off to an excellent start! Sojourner McConnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16263860345139395299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-2523708513962386622017-04-30T19:14:48.380-05:002017-04-30T19:14:48.380-05:00Thanks, kate, for the feedback. I appreciate it ve...Thanks, kate, for the feedback. I appreciate it very much . . . and thanks also for stopping by. Now I have to get back at the story. Positive reinforcement works every timecj pettersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10057216983469158184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-40423627621696857812017-04-30T19:11:30.581-05:002017-04-30T19:11:30.581-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.cj pettersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10057216983469158184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840213685906004202.post-62120589877893238812017-04-30T18:08:31.299-05:002017-04-30T18:08:31.299-05:00Strong writing, compelling characters, a mysteriou...Strong writing, compelling characters, a mysterious death, and Colorado. I'm hooked! :-) --kateC. T. Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07056021289925210090noreply@blogger.com