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Showing posts with label #selfediting. Show all posts
Showing posts with label #selfediting. Show all posts

Sunday, October 13, 2019

The importance of a copy editor


cj Sez:  I’m feeling pretty mellow right now. It’s Saturday night, and I just got home from the Allison Krause concert in Mobile. She has such a great voice.

   Okay on to the blog post: Did you ever open a book, read a few chapters (or even a few lines), and then put it down because of errata, i.e.; those typos and misspellings that drive a pedantic like me up a wall. One or two will make me pause and shake my head; gremlins happen. A lot of them will stop me in my tracks.

  Now, I’m finding errors in books by established authors and big publishing houses that, I thought, should do better. Perhaps it comes down to the time it takes to do a detailed copy edit vs. getting the book on the market. 
(Definition: Copy editing is the process of reviewing and correcting written material to improve accuracy, readability, and fitness for its purpose, and to ensure that it is free of error, omission, inconsistency, and repetition.)
   Speaking from experience, self-edits and beta readers do not, will not, and cannot catch everything that a professional copy editor will. When I was gainfully employed, one of my report/column-writing rules was to get as many people as possible to read the document . . . the more eyes on it the better the end product. That wasn’t easy to do as I was always on an eleven a.m. deadline every day, and my work wasn’t on the top of someone else’s to-do list. But the effort was so worth it.

   The same thing is true about an author’s manuscript. I, me, personally, want my manuscript to be the best I can make it. I read the document on the computer screen, and then I print a few pages. Because the text looks different when printed, I’ll usually find the missing comma, period, or quotation mark that was missed on numerous computer-screen read-throughs. Sometimes, I make a copy of the printed page. Copying changes the size of the font once again, yet I will too often find another gremlin to correct.

   My advice to indie-published authors: Don’t presume that because you’ve typed “The End,” your manuscript is finished. It’s probably months away from being ready for publication. It needs fresh eyes. It’s a personal and financial consideration for each author, but please consider hiring a copy editor if you can afford it. 


   Caveat: Expect that if your manuscript is accepted by a publisher, their punctuation rules for how they want their publication to look may differ from your copy editor’s input, and there could be (probably will be) more changes to be made

   By the by, as the masthead of Lyrical Pens says, if you have a book you want to promote (new or one you want to refresh), let me know. We can arrange a blog date…the only caveat is that this site is PG 13.

   That’s it for this week’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. See you next week?

cj
CHOOSING CARTER and DEADLY STAR are quick reads chock full of adventure with a touch of sassy banter and sweet romance. Get your Kindle copy on Amazon…visit my Amazon Central Author Page = https://amzn.to/2v6SrAj for more information about my stories.

   TO ORDER an autographed copy of CHOOSING CARTER, DEADLY STAR, HOMETOWN HEROES, and/or THE POSSE, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: The Haunted Bookshop  Angela Trigg, the awesome owner and a RITA Award-winning author in her own right (writing as Angela Quarles) will be happy to ship you the book(s) of your choice.

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Sunday, November 25, 2018

A bit about self-editing


cj Sez: Writers live and writhe on reviews . . .
but this note from one of my Facebook friended authors puts reviews into perspective:
“You have officially arrived when someone makes a Goodreads account JUST to one-star your book that isn't even out yet. Ha! Do watch for the trolls, ladies. They are everywhere.”
   The moral is: We want them, solicit them, need them, but take your reviews with a grain of salt.  

 
   Author/editor Joyce Sterling Scarbrough gave a wonderful presentation on self-editing to the Mobile Writers Guild recently. She left us with a slew of important tips, and I thought I’d share this one:

Order of Cumulative Adjectives
(Does not require a comma)
Pronouns, articles (his, my, her, the, a, an, etc.)
Quantity (two, many)
Opinion (beautiful, expensive)
Size, Shape, Length (big, round, long)
Age (old, new young)
Color (red, blue, neon)
Nationality or religion (American, Catholic)
Material or purpose (cotton, athletic, yoga)
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   I hope everyone survived Black Friday shopping with their credit cards intact because do I have a deal for you, and you don’t have to leave home to buy it.

Hometown Heroes, a Christmas Anthology . . . a collection of short stories that celebrate every day heroes. A portion of the proceeds is being donated to the Cajun Navy, a volunteer organization dedicated to helping neighbors in distress.

   Available for pre-order now on Amazon (digital is 99 cents).  I leave you with some blurbs to pique your interest:

Courtship and Courage by Carrie Dalby
    "Courtship and Courage,” a short story sequel to the novel FORTITUDE, takes readers back to Dauphin Island, Mon Louis Island, and Mobile, Alabama, in 1898 with Claire O'Farrell and Joe Walker.

When Time Stood Still by Chelsi Arnold & J D Boudreaux
    Jacqueline Jones leaves New York City, going ninety-to-nothing. Nick Lapointe leaves Louisiana at a much slower and easier pace. Their worlds collide in the Tennessee Smokey Mountains at Christmastime.

Hobbes House Noel by cj petterson
    Merrill Cowper plans to spend Christmas alone. DivorcĂ© Bradley Warner plans to spend Christmas with his son. Hobbes House is the catalyst that unites everyone for a new beginning and a Merry Christmas.

Talking in Code by E. A. Hale
    Management terminates suffragette Evelyn and gives her job to war veteran James. Then a Christmas gala that fetes Choctaw Code Talkers and an explosion at the factory bring them together in a way that has everything to do with love. 

Safe Haven by Jolie St. Amant
    Year after year, Haven Cross returns to the Chateau Rouge to relive the bittersweet memory of the death of her fiancĂ©. When she meets the charming Chance Montgomery, she’s unsure if she’s brave enough to risk giving her broken heart to a new love.
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That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.

cj
Books make great Christmas gifts:
The anthology is still available on Kindle.  Buy at   https://amzn.to/2Kcgr9k

Choosing Carter    https://amzn.to/2CJxs8Z

Deadly Star   https://amzn.to/2O8NFGZ

The Posse, a Western anthology   https://amzn.to/2EKUA9B

Pieces, a Mobile Writers Guild Anthology https://amzn.to/2Dk84Yr