cj Sez: I was in a deep research dive for a historical fiction short story I wanted to write and came across this in my archives. I think it’s worth sharing again with the Lyrical Pens audience—readers, writers, and editors, too.
Some things to remember when writing historical fiction manuscripts:
First, as with all stories, a well-developed conflict drives the plot.
I have seen historical manuscripts defined as those set in a time that predates the end of World War II.
That makes a lot of writers I know personally historical figures, so I don’t buy into that definition. Historical to me predates the end of World War I, but for your story, you go ahead and be safe. Use the World War II definition.
Historical characters and their dialogues have to be appropriate to the time and setting.
Believe it or not, sailors in the 17th and 18th centuries pioneered the wearing of trousers (“slops”) made of a denim fabric called “jean.” but the plural term “jeans” wasn’t used in the United States until 1843.1
Historical manuscripts require long hours of research (notice my footnotes just in this post).
The things that fill the scenes have to belong there. For example:
Incandescent lights didn’t exist before the late 1800s.2 Prior to 1947, the number of U.S. homes with television sets could be measured in the thousands3—some of the very wealthy people may have had one.
Avoid the dreaded info dump. Don’t beat your reader over the head with all the historical details you’ve discovered.
Historical elements are essential, but they should be blended into the plot. You want these details to draw the reader deeper into your story, not bore them.
From personal experience I can verify that all of the above point directly to long hours of exacting research to write a historical fiction story.
Caveat Scriptor: If a history buff reading your novel spots an error s/he considers egregious, your Amazon review will not only reflect that reader’s disappointment but can deter potential buyers as well.
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