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Showing posts with label #ramonadefelicelong. Show all posts
Showing posts with label #ramonadefelicelong. Show all posts

Sunday, October 25, 2020

Murphy's Law 2020 strikes again

 cj Sez: My gas fire log gave up the ghost last winter, which was not unexpected because it had more than outlived its one-year warranty. (I will confess to using it almost twenty additional years after I purchased the house which listed the fire log as one of its selling points.)

   In August, I thought I should have a new gas fire log installed and ordered one. After weeks of delayed delivery (two units were delivered to the installer with broken logs) and coronavirus deferred installation, the representative spent three-and-a-half hours in my family room on a beautiful, autumn Saturday afternoon…and couldn’t get the remote control to work right.
 
   Murphy’s Law 2020 strikes again.
 
   I think I expected that to happen and am not upset…yet, but I do know a product that will not get my 5-star review.
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Sharing sad news to report
   Ramona DeFelice Long, teacher, writer, editor extraordinaire, and dear friend to many authors has passed away. 

I had the good fortune to be one of her students during a Sisters-in-Crime/Guppy class. She was a respected, knowledgeable, generous, and kind person. 
 
   Her first novel, MURDERESS OF BAYOU ROSA, was released July 2, 2020, to five-star reviews.
 

   Learn more about Ramona’s literary achievements here:  https://ramonadef.com/
 
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Why it’s good to read anthologies
   Question: When you’re reading a story that drags you deep into the plot, do you wonder how the author could have imagined all those twists and turns? I do because I know personally that writing a coherent story is a difficult and exacting task, and I get a ton of inspiration by reading. In fact, a writer has to be a reader, especially in the genre they write.
 
   Because I also like to read the works of different authors in multiple genres, I find reading anthologies filled with short stories appealing for many reasons, but the top three are:
1) they don’t require a singular lengthy commitment;
2) they provide a lot of variety; and
3) they often introduce me to a new favorite author.
 
   I say three cheers for anthologies and their short stories! (Try it, you’ll like it.)
 
   I’ve been fortunate to have short stories published in three different anthologies in 2020—VALENTINE’S DAY PIECES, BIENVENUE TO THE CHATEAU ROUGE, HALLOWEEN PIECES—and there’s a fourth one in the editing process, HOMEROOM HEROES.
 
   All the anthologies offer readers all around good reading in a variety of themes and styles.
 
   In the Mobile Writers Guild latest anthology,
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HALLOWEEN PIECES, there are eighteen pieces from seventeen authors, ranging from ghost and paranormal stories to poems and even a play.
 
   The anthology is available on Amazon (free on Kindle Unlimited), and several of the authors have signed some copies that are now available from The Haunted Bookshop (see where to order below).
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Add the following anthology to your shopping list also:
   I’m in the process of going through edit cycles for my short story, “The Substitute,” in Bienvenue Press’s annual charity anthology, HOMEROOM HEROES. Here’s a teaser:

   When FBI agent Aron Olsen is assigned to work undercover as a substitute adapted physical education teacher, he knew he’d need a lot of help.
 
   When the principal assigned Melanie Andrews the job of helping the new substitute teacher with his charges, she learned how to turn her can’ts into cans and her dreams into plans.

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REMEMBER TO EXERCISE 
YOUR RIGHT/PRIVILEGE/DUTY TO VOTE
(If you haven’t voted absentee, I’ll be a poll worker on November 3 and looking for you.)
 
  That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.
 
   (P.S. Daylight Saving Time ends next Sunday, November 1, and we turn our clocks one hour. I intend to turn my clocks back to a gentler, kinder time, if I can determine what year that was.) 


 
cj

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   The store has re-opened to limited hours, so if you’re in the Mobile area, you can stop and shop, too.
 
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Saturday, April 6, 2019

40 Days with Ramona

cj Sez: I wonder how many of my Lyrical Pens visitors have been, like me, the beneficiaries of author and editor Ramona De Felice Long’s Spring 2019 project. 

   Instead of fasting for Lent, Ramona, my Sisters in Crime/Guppy mate, generously pledged to post 40 days of free worksheets on a variety of topics. The keyword here is “free.” 

   I can’t believe how fast the time has flown. Only a few more days to go. I’ve saved them all to use as references as I’m struggling through my works in progress.

   Drop in on Ramona’s website at www.ramonadef.com to learn more.
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In case you missed it . . .

   Susan Spann Craig recently offered this blog on Fiction University:  “How to Calculate Amazon Fees for Printing Paperbacks Using KDP Print” by David Woghan. I’m not (yet) an indie publisher, but I’m leaning hard in that direction. I found the essay interesting. Maybe you will, too. Read all about it here:  https://bit.ly/2I43oIH
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April 27, 2019, is INDEPENDENT BOOKSTORE DAY. The Mobile Writers Guild (of which I am a member) is sponsoring an all-day “Ask the Experts & Speed Critiques” at Mobile’s newest bookseller, The Haunted Bookshop.

   Want to know about Sci-Fi, fantasy, self-publishing, world-creating, women’s fiction, kidlit, historical, Gothic, editing, or marketing? MWG members will be on-hand from 10 a.m. to 9 p.m. answering questions about these topics and more. There will be a raffle (a chance to win a copy of MWG’s latest anthology). Local authors will also be autographing books.

   I’ll be there from 10 to 11:30 a.m. answering questions, mostly about romance stories. Is there a formula for writing romance? The first thing that comes to mind is that you can’t write a page-turning romance story unless you're a fan of the genre and read copious numbers of romance books. Readers and writers stop by The Haunted Bookshop on the 27th, and we’ll talk about it.

That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I'll try to do the same. 

cj
Free on Kindle Unlimited at the time of this post:  CHOOSING CARTER           

Bryn McKay goes on a rafting trip on the untamed Yampa River with her best friend, naturalist and outdoor guide Carter Danielson—and she wouldn't mind if things turned romantic. Unfortunately, Carter is a recovering alcoholic who shies away from commitment. That is, until the two of them stumble across her revenge-seeking brother.

Will Carter figure out where his heart lies? Will Bryn have to watch someone she loves die?

Little note: Print copies of Choosing Carter and Deadly Star are becoming scarce as Simon&Schuster winds down their support of the Crimson Romance imprint. HOWEVER, you can order an autographed copy of my books and support an indie book store here: The Haunted Bookshop  Angela Trigg, the awesome owner and a RITA Award-winning author in her own right (writing as Angela Quarles) will be happy to ship you the book(s) of your choice.

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Sunday, March 11, 2018

40 Days of questions, and a good copy edit is a must


cj Sez: Daylight Savings Time is here. Did you remember to Spring Forward one hour? I did then forgot to actually do it (sigh).


I wonder how many of my Lyrical Pens visitors have been, like me, the beneficiaries of author and editor Ramona De Felice Long’s 40 days of questions.  Instead of fasting for Lent, Ramona, my Sisters in Crime/Guppy mate, pledged to ask three thought-provoking questions (writing tasks) every day for 40 days.

I can’t believe how fast the time has flown. Only a few more days to go. I’ve saved them all as reminders and cues while I’m writing.

The next time you’re on Facebook, slip over to Ramona’s site and ask to friend her. You can reach her on Facebook at http://bit.ly/2FuOiqB  or at her website:  www.ramonadef.com


Speaking of editors, do you ever open a book, read a few chapters (or even a few lines), and then put it down because of errata gremlins, i.e.; those typos, misspellings, and factual errors that drive a pedantic like me crazy. One or two will make me shake my head and pause. More than that and the book becomes a give-away.

It used to be that indie books were the worst. They tended to be poorly edited and poorly written. Now, I find errors in books by established authors and big publishing houses who should know better. Perhaps the problem comes down to the time it takes to do a detailed copy edit vs. getting the book on the market.

Self-published books are so often done on such a shoestring (cost-wise) that the author can't afford to hire a copy editor. Unfortunately, I have come across some who simply don’t want to go through the process.

Speaking from experience, self-edits and beta readers do not, will not, and cannot catch everything that a good copy editor will. You do not, however, need to hire a copy editor for your first draft…nor your second or third or however many drafts it takes to get your story told.  Don’t presume that because you’ve typed “The End,” your manuscript is ready to publish. It’s probably months away from publication. It needs fresh eyes. That’s when you should consider hiring a copy editor.

What does a copy editor do, you ask? Besides checking spelling and correcting grammar and punctuation, copy editors review the manuscript for proper word usage and syntax. They make sure the author has maintained a logical and consistent flow of style, and they polish the story structure. 

Personally I want my manuscript to be the best I can make it. I read the document on the computer screen, and then I print a few pages. Because the text looks different when printed, It makes it easier to find the missing comma, period, or quotation mark that was missed on numerous computer-screen read-throughs. Sometimes, I make a copy of the printed page. Copying changes the size of the font once again, and I will (too often) find something else to correct. When you’ve gotten this far, read it out loud. Your mind won’t self-correct what isn't on the page when the text is read out loud. 

It’s a personal and financial consideration for each author, but please consider hiring an editor if you can afford it. Caveat: Expect that if your manuscript is accepted by a publisher, their punctuation rules and style manual for how they want their publication to look may differ from your copy editor’s input, and there could be more changes needed. But don’t think of your copy editor dollars as being wasted. They got your story accepted.
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Got any horror or triumphant stories to share? Lyrical Pens would love to read them.

You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.

cj
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