cj Sez: My first drafts are crappy and sparse, mainly for two reasons: First, I was once a corporate journalist/editor with limited line space, and second, I got turned on to creative writing by a screenwriter. (I won’t delve into my brain cramps and writer’s blocks.) I often get criticized for my lack of details
, but once I’m finished with the first go-through, my
editing process expands on details of the five senses…hear, see, taste, smell,
feel… and the characters’ state of mind.
I do incorporate some action descriptors, but I consider too many of them stage direction. Some writers use them to “tell” their readers what to think or as a way to add words to a short manuscript.
Action needs to have purpose. If describing an action doesn't contribute to the reader's knowledge of the character, scene conflict, or mood, then it’s stage direction. Because I write mostly suspense and thrillers, I have a minimalist approach to action … using few words speeds up the pace and heightens the tension. On the other hand, readers of cozy mysteries or more narrative-based novels want (and expect) to know every detail.
It’s a good way to control the pace of your novel. Even in suspense and thrillers, there are places where the reader needs a respite from the action. These would be the spots where I add more detail…or beats. Places where I can reveal more of the characters’ growth, i.e., transformation, as the plot progresses.
Hint: Adding detail words slows the pace; being stingy speeds it up.
When action is needed to set some mood for the scene, then yes, I detail the action. Sometimes I add details to slow the action and increase the tension. If I want a character to give the reader a sense of impending danger and fear, then I add more description to the action. I tend to follow the lead of my favorite authors...Robert Parker, Stephen King, James Lee Burke...their succinct style of writing is what I like to read, and it is this reader who is my target market.
Hint: Write what you like to read...for your target market.
When I write, I take my cues from screenwriting, except I’m the actor. Since internal dialogue doesn't convert easily to the movie screen, I tend to develop most of the characterizations within action. I step through the scene in my mind and react to the events as my characters would, physically and mentally. I can do that because I know their personalities well enough to know what they would do in a given situation. I want my readers to identify the character more by what s/he does and says rather than what I might tell them (aka author intrusion).
Fiction, non-fiction, whatever the genre, each has a different set of “rules” because the readers have different expectations and wants. The key is to write for your target market . . . and make that the genre you read and analyze. Over time, the structure of the genre will become second nature, and your writing will be even more successful.
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Okay, that’s all folks. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.