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Monday, June 1, 2026

My personal library of works has grown

cj Sez: After several years dedicated to writing short stories for anthologies, I’ve finally produced my third full novel. A TIME TO DIE launched on May 5. Here’s the line-up:


Suspense/thriller/mystery novels with likeable protagonists who bring a bit of easy banter and a touch of romance to the stories and antagonists you come to understand. For J. A. Konnor in A Time to Die, think Janet Evanovich's Stephanie Plum.

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  Let me tell you about my writing voice for those three novels above. Three different, yet related genres: action/adventure, suspense, and mystery, What remains the same among the genres in which I write is that I want my protagonist to be smart, likeable with a sassy dialogue, have some personality quirks, and carry a bit of backstory baggage to be dropped intermittently into the story (no info dumps, please). Each book has a unique setting and a love interest to add a little jazz. Each of the main characters, including the bad guy, has a goal or secret that I hope will generate perhaps a smidgen of empathy . . . and I love all of them.

  Where I struggled most often writing that new mystery was with its clues and red herrings. Where and how do I place them so they lure the reader deeper into the suspense/mystery without giving away too much information? 

  That’s a wonderful challenge, and I didn’t know if I succeeded until I read my first review of A Time to Die:

“I just finished reading cj petterson Author’s latest mystery, A TIME TO D*E. It’s set in and around Mobile so it’s really neat to see local eateries and places mentioned. And Jake, our PI main character, loves to eat just as much as she likes to get to the bottom of her cases.

The mystery was full of twists and turns, and I didn’t guess the villain until the very end even though the clues were there.

Congrats on your newest mystery novel, cj.”

  Peers may refer to me as a pantser, but I claim to be, more accurately, a pathfinder. I begin knowing how my story starts and kind of how it will end. Unlike following a beautifully constructed plot, I love snaking a path through the tale by throwing roadblocks in front of my characters then figuring out how to have them escape and move forward. For a mystery like A Time to Die, I did have to do a bit of {gasp} pre-plotting before I could drop the clues and red herrings in places that I hoped would best entice readers to continue their hunt for answers until the end.

  All my stories, short or long, true or fictional, change and grow with each edit cycle. I work hard to see that the characters, settings, clues, and red herrings are more thoroughly developed with each go-around. My problem is I am happiest writing with a deep point of view to allow my readers to “read into” the story rather than me, the author, inserting herself and telling them exactly what to see. To that end, I tend to “write tight,” without a lot of internal narrative. I rarely reach more than 50,000 words on my first draft, and when I start that first edit cycle, I sometimes fear I will edit the words right off the page rather than add them. I blame it on my corporate journalism background. Despite that, I enjoy fleshing out my characters by getting into their minds. 

  What I really enjoyed about writing A Time to Die was the daily challenge of having to learn new-to-me writing rules. Of course, I certainly will have to relearn them and more the next time I undertake a story. My personal goal is, and has always been, to learn something new every day.

  How about you? What’s your personal goal?

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For writers and readers

  It’s never too early to start collecting records for tax purposes, and author Kaye George offers up some tips. The blog post is a few years old, but chockful of tips and links to sites to answer your questions about 2026 tax rules for writers who are not hobbyists.

  “You DON'T have to earn money to take deductions if you tell them you're a writer. Honest! You don't! You just have to prove that you're trying to get published. Keep records, keep track of mileage, office expenses, conference expenses, meals with other writers, and I keep a time sheet to show how many hours I devote to which tasks.

  Here's a post I did on it:”
Kaye George, National Best-selling & Agatha-nominated mystery author~~

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  Like it, don’t like it, don’t care? Artificial intelligence is a real and present conundrum for publishers. Jane Friedman says:  “What I think will happen over the long term: Anti-AI policies will fall away.”  Read more of her article here:


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June 14 is Flag Day:

“The folding of the U.S. flag during ceremonial occasions, such as military funerals, is a deeply symbolic act, with each of the 13 folds traditionally ascribed specific meanings.” 


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  That’s it for this month’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.

cj

 Just a reminder: Lyrical Pens blog for readers and writers is now a monthly issue, kind of like a newsletter. I’ll be aiming for the first of the month, whatever day that is, so watch for it please. That said, thank you for stopping by Lyrical Pens today. I really do appreciate every one of my visitors. Drop me a comment or a question, and we’ll talk.

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Sunday, June 14, 2020

An almost-forgotten holiday

cj Sez: Today is FLAG DAY, the day set aside by President Woodrow Wilson in 1916 to celebrate the anniversary of the Stars and Stripes as our national flag.

   On June 14, 1777, the Second Continental Congress designated, by resolution, a United States flag with “13 stripes, alternate red and white” and “13 white stars in a blue field.” The stars were in a circle so that no one colony would be viewed above another. It is reported that George Washington said, “Let the 13 stars in a circle stand as a new constellation in the heavens.” Today the 13 stripes remain, representing the 13 original colonies. Since 1960, shortly after Hawaii became our fiftieth state, there have been 50 white stars in that blue field.

   The Continental Congress left no record to show why it chose the colors. However, in 1782, the Congress of the Confederation chose these same colors for the Great Seal of the United States and listed their meaning as follows: white to mean purity and innocence, red for valor and hardiness, and blue for vigilance, perseverance, and justice. According to legend, George Washington interpreted the elements of the flag this way: the stars were taken from the sky, the red from the British colors, and the white stripes signified the secession from the home country.

   Find fast facts about “Old Glory” here: https://www.history.com/news/what-is-flag-day

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   Writing apropos metaphors: A Jane Friedman blog post by developmental book editor Jessi Rita Hoffman.
   “Do you torture your metaphors, linking unlike things in outrageous comparisons? Do you manufacture odd phrases and invent “words” in an attempt to seem “literary” and “sound like a writer”? If so, you probably don’t even know you are doing this, yet the pretentious writing this results in is one of the marks of an amateur writer.”

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   The Mystery Writers of America organization posted an extensive list of books written by some of their members. A favorite author or new best friend author…you’re sure to find a book that grabs your interest here:  https://mysterywriters.org/new-books-by-mwa-members-june-2020/?fbclid=IwAR3cJ43CqSyrmnT_6vlrzzAr30uu39lqDKsVBRJ_5Jj2u-yZCy13QOtcsuQ

   According to MWA:  “They may all be found at your local Independent Bookstore.  Remember – books make the best presents and can help get you through these challenging times. Visit this link to find a store near you: http://www.indiebound.org/  ”

(cj Sez: In Mobile, The Haunted Bookshop is one of the “indiebound” stores.)   
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  That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same, (Sending up prayers for your health and safety.)

cj

   My love story, “Love is Immortal” is one of the short stories in Bienvenue to the Chateau Rouge anthology.

   One of the 5 star reviews for Bienvenue…In love with the Chateau Rouge
“I can’t express how much I want to book my next vacation at the Chateau Rouge. I have absolutely fallen in love with the place and its inhabitants. All the stories make you feel as if they aren’t only real, but old friends.”


   TO ORDER my autographed books or any book of your choice on-line from my favorite indie bookstore, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: The Haunted Bookshop 

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