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Sunday, December 12, 2021

The gift that keeps on giving

cj Sez: It’s true, books make great gifts, and here’s why:


  I think anthologies are an even better option. The anthology HOMETOWN HEROES (one of the charity books from Bienvenue Press) has five, easy-reading, short stories to prove it…here’s an excerpt from my short story, “Hobbes House Noel:”

Schneider’s Tree Service had dumped a face cord of wood on the ground near the pines and was following the power company truck out of the drive when Bradley Warner’s red Dodge Ram 1500 pickup drove in. Merrill waved him in. Timing is everything. The pickup is a surprise though. She was sure he’d be driving a fancy sport utility vehicle or some big butt import sedan.
“Hey there! Welcome to Hobbes House.”
“Any relation to Calvin and?”
“One and the same. My favorite cartoon. Well, that and Charlie Brown.”
Trey dropped down out of the pickup pointing in the direction of the pine trees. “Look. A wolf.”
Merrill saw the bushy tail of a fox disappear into the grove of pines. “It’s a fox, Trey. He’s looking for something to eat. Probably a field mouse in the woodpile.”
Bradley walked up with a suitcase in each hand. “Don’t try to get too close to him, Trey. He’s a wild animal and might bite you.”
“Your father’s right.” She took a longer look at Bradley. Almost black hair. Clear blue eyes. A warm, broad smile that revealed a slightly crooked front tooth. Close to six-feet tall. My gosh. I’m looking at Prince Charming. “Foxes usually run away if you make some loud noises, but you never know for sure. Did you have any trouble finding the place?”
“Not at all. Your good directions and a GPS made it easy. MapQuest showed gravel and dirt roads so I brought the pickup just in case.”
Of course, he’d have more than one car. “Great. Let me show you around.”
“Grab your backpack, Trey.”
The boy was walking toward the pier. “Aw, Dad. I want to see the lake.”
“We will in a minute. Let’s get our stuff in the house first.” He turned to Merrill and spoke quietly. “It’s his first Christmas without his mother. She’s in Atlanta. Said she wanted to spend some alone time with her next victim.” He paused a moment. “Sorry, that was personal pity-party shot,” he said.
Merrill’s lips parted in a little “O,” and she hoped he didn’t notice her surprise. “Sounds like hurt to me.”
“Not for myself. For Trey.”
“A first Christmas without someone you love is hard. Very hard.” I understand more than you know.
Merrill walked her renters through the cabin and saw to it that Bradley knew how to start and bank the fireplace. “If the temperature is forecast to drop into the twenties, leave the cabinet doors under the sinks open. Keeps the pipes from freezing. Any questions?”
“Nope, I think we’re all set.”
“I left my cell phone number on the kitchen table if you need anything.”
“Wait, there is one thing. Is there some place we can get a small Christmas tree and decorations to go with those pretty lights you strung on the porch? Nice touch, by the way.”
Her face warmed at the compliment. “There’s a Grab ’n Go Market about five minutes from here. They carry a bit of everything you need. Go to the blacktop and turn left. You can’t miss it.” She slipped on her green barn coat. “I’ll stack the firewood while you’re gone and then get out of here,” she said as she pulled a pair of tan, deer-hide gloves out of her coat pocket.
“Got a pair of gloves for me?”
After a moment’s hesitation, Merrill smiled. “I think I can find a pair.”
He shrugged on his coat, helped Trey into his, and followed her out. She opened the trunk of the Honda and pulled out a pair of her father’s work gloves. “These should fit.”
Fifteen minutes into the task, Bradley noticed Trey was no longer in sight. “Trey,” he called then blew a shrill whistle through his teeth and frowned at the silence that followed. “He always answers.” He whistled again.
Merrill dropped the log she was carrying and tore off her gloves. “Maybe he’s exploring that little patch of trees, but he couldn’t have gotten far. Do you think he might be hiding from you?” In the back of her mind, though, the thought that the boy might be looking for the fox put her on high alert.
Brad jogged across the drive toward the trees with Merrill right behind him. Merrill kept yelling “Trey? Trey?” and Brad alternated between yelling the boy’s name and whistling.  
After they had searched the small copse without finding Trey, Merrill remembered the boy’s fascination with the lake and dread squeezed her heart with a cold hand. “Let’s check the pier.”
Then they heard the boy scream and started running. When they rounded the corner of the house, she stopped and grabbed Brad’s arm. “Wait!”
Crouching at the end of the pier, teeth bared and growling, the normally shy fox looked ready to attack. Trey was standing between the fox and the animal’s escape route.


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   I’m a subscriber to Jane Friedman’s blog, and the following post arrived in my email recently. If you haven’t seen it, you might find it interesting reading.

https://www.janefriedman.com/yes-social-media-can-sell-books-but-not-if-publishers-sit-on-their-hands/

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Promo courtesy of Carrie Dalby Author  

STORMY PIECES Buy Now

   And when you’ve finished reading an anthology, we all would sure appreciate it if you’d take a few moments to leave a brief review. Please and thank you!

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 That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.

cj

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  p.p.s. All of my stories are author-graphed and waiting.

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Sunday, July 25, 2021

My friend Fen and his friend, Elmore Leonard

cj Sez: When I worked in Chrysler’s Employee Communications Department, I met an ad man who was an honest-to-gosh World War II American hero (served with General George S. Patton in France and Germany). Fen became a dear, dear friend, and we stayed in close touch until his death at age 97 this past January. It was Fenton Ludtke who introduced me to Elmore Leonard’s writing discipline.

(Out of Print)

   Fen had worked with Elmore Leonard at an ad agency for a time and had great admiration for his writing and his discipline, as I came to appreciate also. But I appreciated Fen most of all: a gentle man with great wit, sensitivity, and quiet earnestness who unflaggingly supported and encouraged my feeble first attempts at writing a novel.

   Back to Elmore Leonard: I wish I could have begged, borrowed, or stolen some of the man’s discipline for writing. What started as necessity for him (his job required it) turned into habit when he became an established writer.
“To support his family, he worked as a copywriter at an ad agency, where he developed his aversion to adverbs, and also his knack for brief, punched-up prose. He began a habit of waking at five a.m. and immediately starting to write -- not even putting the water on for coffee until he had something down on paper -- then going to work at the office, first in advertising and later writing educational films for the Encyclopedia Britannica.”
(Source: http://www.biographile.com/a-capital-crime-elmore-leonard-deserves-a-definitive-biography/22523/ ) 
   It used to be that I worked better when I had a short-term deadline, as was always the case in my job in Employee Communications. After I retired and began to write novels and short stories, I thought if I gave myself a deadline to meet, I’d knock out stories in no time flat.

  Found out that’s not true. I manage to bury any self-imposed deadline under weeks of procrastination that I call “research.” (Elmore Leonard paid others to do his research.) It seems that the more I research, the less creativity I have. I get lost among the fascinating facts in those research rabbit holes, and my story suffers. I am learning a lot of stuff, though.
 
   Unlike Mr. Leonard, I’m not usually such an early morning riser after I retired. Six-thirty is about all I can manage and still stay awake the whole day. However, occasionally, as was the case a couple of mornings ago, at four a.m., I will make a note about one of the WIPs I have in my computer and promptly crawl back into bed. I sometimes get good ideas just before I fall asleep or when I’m dreaming. That’s why I keep a pad of paper and a pencil on the table next to the bed. Some ideas I use, others don’t turn out to be the good idea I thought they were.

   I’m not a believer in writer’s block. When I get stuck, I think I just need to take a break from my WiP, and I will read some other author’s fine work. It doesn’t make a difference the genre. It might even be a book of poetry. 

   I find that an escape into someone else’s work almost always provides the nudge I need to send one of my characters up another proverbial tree so I can throw rocks at her in the middle of the manuscript.

   How about you? When do you get your best ideas? How do you conquer the blank page in front of you?
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Writerly/Readerly quote:
“My alma mater was books, a good library…. I could spend the rest of my life reading, just satisfying my curiosity.” - Malcolm X
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And now a few words from my sponsor:

   Someone said, it’s never too soon to start your Christmas shopping. (I think it was one of my kids.) 

   These anthologies make wonderful gifts, filled with timeless stories that are wonderful reads all year long. Bonus points: Part of the proceeds of three of them benefits charities.


   THE DAWGSTAR is available as an eBook from the etailers listed here... https://books2read.com/u/3LRRG5
and as a paperback  Amazon Buy Now

   DEATH ON THE YAMPA is available as an eBook from multiple etailers...  https://books2read.com/u/bxe1AP
as a paperback  Buy Paperback Yampa
and as a #SCREAM, series phone app. There are a lot of authors and their mystery/suspense stories available on #SCREAM. All you do is load up the app and search for the author’s name.
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   Draft2Digital tells me that you can ask your local library to order my eBooks for you. You’ll need to give them the ISBN number of the title you want to borrow. I’ve listed mine below.
THE DAWGSTAR … ISBN 978-17369146-0-1
DEATH ON THE YAMPA … ISBN 978-1-7369146-1-8
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   That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.

cj
 
P.S. TO ORDER any book of your choice on-line and support an indie bookstore, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us
   If you’d like me to autograph or personalize one of my books for you, be sure to tell them, and I’ll run by the shop.
   The Haunted Bookshop has re-opened to limited hours (and they have an awesome bookstore kitty, Mr. Bingley), so if you’re in the Mobile area, you can stop and shop, too.
 
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Sunday, December 20, 2020

A week of exceptional events...

 cj Sez:  On December 21, the Winter Solstice occurs in the Northern Hemisphere. That’s when the nights reach their longest in the global north—in Fairbanks in Alaska, the sun barely makes it above the horizon during the winter solstice before the scene dips back into darkness. 

   Conversely the date is the Summer Solstice in the Southern Hemisphere, when the days reach their longest in the global south.

   For you romance writers, if your protagonist exclaimed that the earth stood still when her lover kissed her, she might be right—depending on when the kiss happened. How is that so, you ask?

   It’s because for several days before and after each summer or winter solstice, the sun appears to stand still in the sky, i.e., the sun actually pauses in its path at a northern or southern limit before reversing direction… for two or three days.

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Star light, star bright . . .    

   As 2020 skids to a close, the world will witness a celestial Christmas phenomenon that it hasn’t seen in nearly 800 years, not since March 4, 1226.
During the December 21 Winter Solstice, the planets Jupiter and Saturn will align so closely together that to the naked eye they will appear to be one dazzling star—referred to as the “Star of Bethlehem” or the “Christmas Star.” The astronomical phenomenon is expected to stay visible in the Northern Hemisphere for the entire last week of December.

   Mark your calendars for a once-in-a-lifetime look, because the brilliant star won’t appear again until 2080.

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Buy Now

   Books are Christmas gifts that keep on giving year-round, and anthologies are even better because there’s more than one story to enjoy. 

   With that in mind, let me help you out with a wonderful gift idea: Seven short stories in one great anthology, HOMEROOM HEROES. 

   Better yet, it’s a two-fer: part of the proceeds from this anthology will benefit the Acadiana Writing Project. 

   My short story “The Substitute,” is about an FBI agent working undercover as a substitute adapted physical education teacher for a class of physically and mentally challenged students while he investigates Federal fraud and tax evasion. His job gets even more complicated when he falls in love with the beautiful, first-grade teacher assigned to help him with the kids.

   HOMEROOM HEROES joins HOMETOWN HEROES and FINALLY HOME as the third in a series of anthologies published by Bienvenue Press benefiting various charities. All are free on Kindle Unlimited. 

   From paranormal to contemporary to historical, there are short stories in all three anthologies to fill everyone with the spirit of the season. Look for them on Amazon and at other fine book sellers.

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   December 25 is the third auspicious event this week. Though it may seem rather antithetical to wish everyone a Merry Christmas when we’re still in the throes of a pandemic, it is with joy that I celebrate the birth of Christ—a figure of love and hope.

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  That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.

cj 
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Sunday, November 22, 2020

Tidbits for writers and readers

 cj Sez:  Here’s a tip for authors from my fellow Mobile Writers Guild member Joyce Sterling Scarbrough:  “Chicken Soup for the Soul has a number of submission calls out right now, including one for kids and teens dealing with the challenges of this pandemic.”

Changing Your World One Story at a Time®

   “If you or a young writer you know has a story or poem you'd like published, please submit!”  

And cj's tip for readers…these are great books for your to-be-read stack.

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Rooting for you… This is how you do it: you sit down at the keyboard and you put one word after another until it’s done. It’s that easy, and that hard. — Neil Gaiman

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   Nearing the home stretch and worried you aren’t going to succeed? Here are some words from Kurt Vonnegut:

   “When I was 15, I spent a month working on an archeological dig. I was talking to one of the archeologists one day during our lunch break and he asked those kinds of “getting to know you” questions you ask young people: Do you play sports? What’s your favorite subject? And I told him, no I don’t play any sports. I do theater, I’m in choir, I play the violin and piano, I used to take art classes.

  And he went WOW. That’s amazing! And I said, “Oh no, but I’m not any good at ANY of them.”

   And he said something then that I will never forget and which absolutely blew my mind because no one had ever said anything like it to me before: “I don’t think being good at things is the point of doing them. I think you’ve got all these wonderful experiences with different skills, and that all teaches you things and makes you an interesting person, no matter how well you do them.”

   And that honestly changed my life. Because I went from a failure, someone who hadn’t been talented enough at anything to excel, to someone who did things because I enjoyed them. I had been raised in such an achievement-oriented environment, so inundated with the myth of Talent, that I thought it was only worth doing things if you could “Win” at them.”

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   John Floyd is a prolific author (he’s written 32 stories in 2020), and his short mysteries are favorites of mine. In a recent Sleuth Sayers column, he recounts how he reworks old, unsubmitted stories he’s had stashed away for years and then submits them…some moved on to become award winners. Maybe there are points you would find worthwhile…I sure did: https://www.sleuthsayers.org/2020/11/the-same-old-story.html?fbclid=IwAR05pLxJJr9NcZGJ1E4LtmsAc7WUbYRHLjUfSrMxkikY1mBmwGyGoTSFP_0

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   HOMETOWN HEROES eBook is on sale now. This anthology brings you five Christmas romances that celebrate everyday heroes.

   From paranormal to contemporary to historical, there's something in this anthology to fill everyone with the spirit of the season.  

   On Amazon: https://amzn.to/3ncvCS5

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   99 CENTS !! PREORDER PRICE for Bienvenue Press’s upcoming charity anthology HOMEROOM HEROES. Look for it on Amazon Saturday, December 5. The final cover reveal coming soon.

   In “The Substitute,” my short story in the anthology, an FBI agent’s undercover assignment as a substitute teacher gets complicated when he falls in love with a first-grade grade teacher. Here are the opening lines:

     “Will Miss Melanie Andrews please report to the office,” the voice blared over the school’s intercom system.              
    Mel stopped setting out the materials she was readying for her first-grade students and stared at the speaker mounted in the corner of her classroom. She frowned, hurriedly dropped the last few crayons on the work tables lining the walls, and sealed the hazmat bag where she’d put the paper towels she used to sanitize the desks.
    “What now? I haven't had time to do anything wrong yet.”
    Being called to the principal’s office wasn’t how Mel wanted to begin her first day back in the classroom after summer break.
    How embarrassing, she thought. Everyone in the school heard that and will be wondering what I’ve done this time.

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That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. 

cj

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Sunday, November 15, 2020

Scene-by-scene...what is drama?

 
cj Sez: Sending my congratulations and best wishes for success to all the writers who accepted the NaNoWriMo challenge. (See more at their websote here: NaNoWriMo)
 
 
   I’m currently working on a novel that now has 40K words….after years (true) of pecking away at it. Obviously, I am not a candidate for the challenge, but I’ve got my fingers crossed that all you writing warriors will carry through to the finish!
You can’t wait for inspiration. You have to go after it with a club. — Jack London
 
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cj Sez: I’ve gone into my archives for the following  post because I think it’s worth repeating for all the new writers entering this publishing world. It may also be helpful for the NaNoWriMo writers when they begin their editing process on December 1.
 
   Having worked as a journalist for a few years, I tend to write my first drafts sparsely
without much narrative. To justify my methodology, I point to Kurt Vonnegut’s eight rules. In this case, specifically No. 4: “Every sentence must do one of two things—reveal character or advance the action.” I know what you’re thinking, and you’re right, rules are made to be broken. However, some are best kept for a while, especially by yet-to-be-bestselling authors, like me.
 
   I also think that I tend to write like a screenwriter (one of the best classes I ever took). I visualize the scene and write to that. By necessity, writers of TV series must think in terms of every scene and every line, because for each hour-long show, they have forty to forty-five minutes to tell the story, beginning to end. (cj Sez: I just checked: the average is forty-two minutes.)
 
   Years ago David Mamet, executive producer of the old action/drama TV series, “The Unit,” had some serious instructions for the show’s writers and sent them a memo that virtually shouted.  (He wrote it in all capital letters, and he had an "inviolable rule.") He directed his writers to concentrate on writing drama if they expected to keep their audience entertained…because if they lost their audience, they’d be out of work. It must’ve worked because the show ran for four seasons. Following are excerpts from that memorable memo:   
 
   "QUESTION: WHAT IS DRAMA? DRAMA, AGAIN, IS THE QUEST OF THE HERO TO OVERCOME THOSE THINGS WHICH PREVENT HIM FROM ACHIEVING A SPECIFIC, ACUTE GOAL.

   SO: WE, THE WRITERS, MUST ASK OURSELVES OF EVERY SCENE THESE THREE QUESTIONS.

1) WHO WANTS WHAT?
2) WHAT HAPPENS IF HER DON’T GET IT?
3) WHY NOW?

   THE ANSWERS TO THESE QUESTIONS ARE LITMUS PAPER. APPLY THEM, AND THEIR ANSWER WILL TELL YOU IF THE SCENE IS DRAMATIC OR NOT.

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   START, EVERY TIME, WITH THIS INVIOLABLE RULE: THE SCENE MUST BE DRAMATIC. IT MUST START BECAUSE THE HERO HAS A PROBLEM, AND IT MUST CULMINATE WITH THE HERO FINDING HIM OR HERSELF EITHER THWARTED OR EDUCATED THAT ANOTHER WAY EXISTS. (cj: I think of his inviolable rule as the writer’s hooks at the beginning and ending of scenes and chapters.)
   
   LOOK AT YOUR LOG LINES. ANY LOGLINE READING “BOB AND SUE DISCUSS…” IS NOT DESCRIBING A DRAMATIC SCENE." (cj: They write loglines for every scene.)
 
cj Note:
A logline is a 25-word synopsis of your book.
A tagline is a catchy “movie poster” phrase.
 
Examples for Jaws –
Logline – After a series of grisly shark attacks, a sheriff struggles to protect his small beach community against the bloodthirsty monster, in spite of the greedy chamber of commerce. (from J. Gideon Sarentinos  http://bit.ly/1D90FmH  (25 words not counting "a" or "the".)
 
Tagline – Don’t go in the water.
 
You can read David Mamet’s entire memo at: 
http://movieline.com/2010/03/23/david-mamets-memo-to-the-writers-of-the-unit/
 
   Okay, let me know if what you think. Agree?  Disagree? Helpful with what you’re working on?
 
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   Tis ALMOST the season, but spreading cheer is always a good thing—especially when it’s a two-fer, and you’re actually helping out a charity, too.
The first two Bienvenue Press Christmas charity anthologies are on sale digitally for the entire month of November. Take advantage of the sale prices to stock your E-reader for December and beyond.
   HOMETOWN HEROES benefits the Cajun Navy Relief & Rescue
   FINALLY HOME helps regional animal rescue programs
 
Both are available on Amazon (free on Kindle Unlimited)

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  Halloween might be over, but the short pieces (stories, poems, even a play) in HALLOWEEN PIECES are timeless. Add this anthology to your Christmas gift-giving list. 

   (P.S. Several of the authors have signed a limited supply of copies available from The Haunted Bookshop (see where to order below).

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  Thank you for visiting Lyrical Pens. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.

cj 

P.S.  TO ORDER my autographed books or any book of your choice on-line from one of my favorite indie bookstores, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us 
The store has re-opened to limited hours, so if you’re in the Mobile area, you can stop and shop, too.

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Sunday, November 8, 2020

Eleventh Hour, Eleventh Day, Eleventh Month

cj Sez:  On Wednesday this week, the U.S. respectfully observes Veterans Day, a day set aside to honor all the veterans whose heroism made and keep this country free.

   “When first celebrated as Armistice Day, the day marked the end of World War I, formally recognized on the '11th hour, of the 11th day, of the 11th month' in 1918.

   “Today we continue to celebrate the day as Veterans Day, still recognizing the original tie with November 11. That means Veterans Day is on the same day every year—November 11—regardless of on which day of the week it falls.”  (Source: https://www.military.com/veterans-day )

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NaNoWriMo  

   If you’re taking part in the challenge, GOPHERIT!

   "Find your best time of the day for writing and write. Don’t let anything else interfere. Afterwards it won’t matter to you that the kitchen is a mess." — Esther Freud

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I won a prize!

   Surprise, surprise, and thank you, thank you! I liked and shared the Facebook post of the Mobile Bookseller, Independent Bookstore, and my name was entered into a drawing to win a prize

   “Congratulations cj petterson!  You are the winner of the Paranormal Romance starter set giveaway!

   “Thank you for all of your shares, everyone!! And don't worry, there will be another giveaway before 2020 finally ends. Maybe a little somethin' somethin' for Christmas? Be on the lookout!

Facebook Link:   Mobile Bookseller

   “We sell or trade previously Loved books! Most of our books are priced around $3.50! If we don't have it, we can order it! We also have a nice collection of NEW Local Author books, and most of them are signed!”

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   That’s it for today’s post. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.

cj

P.S.: 

   Anthologies make great gifts...timeless short stories from different authors for hours of entertainment.

Great news...These digital two-fers from Bienvenue Press are on sale during the month of November—Buy an anthology, support a charity: HOMETOWN HEROES benefits the Cajun Navy (that marvelous group of volunteers helping neighbors after storm floods) and FINALLY HOME benefits various animal rescue groups. 

   Be sure to watch for their soon-to-be-released next Christmas charity anthology: HOMEROOM HEROES to benefits the Acadiana Writing Project.

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Buy Now 

HALLOWEEN PIECES

   The latest anthology from the Mobile Writers Guild has 18 pieces in it.

   Available on Amazon (free on Kindle Unlimited)—and several of the authors have signed a limited supply of copies available from The Haunted Bookshop (see where to order below).

   TO ORDER my autographed books or any book of your choice on-line from my favorite indie bookstore, contact The Haunted Bookshop here: https://www.thehauntedbookshopmobile.com/contact-us

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