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Wednesday, February 1, 2017

Welcome, Mystery Thriller Week author Miriam A. Averna

cj Sez:  Lyrical Pens is delighted to shine the spotlight today on Mystery Thriller Week author Miriam A. Averna who hails from England.

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   Miriam writes horror, dark, mystery, twisted or just plain weird stories. She lives in Milton Keynes, England, but was born in sunny Sicily. She enjoys writing flash fiction, short stories, and No Cure for Fear is her first-ever novel. When not writing, she likes keeping fit, the odd bit of gardening, attempting to play the guitar, and cataloguing ales and craft beers in her head.

   Her first novel, No Cure for Fear, is a gritty, medical thriller that asks the question: can anyone be truly altruistic?  (cj Sez: A poser, for sure.) As in all good mysteries, the characters in this thriller have exceptional wants and needs, but there is always someone or something in the way to achieving their goals. Miriam has graciously agreed to let us read an excerpt from the book. Read on . . .   

Eddy Miller, a local graffiti artist and cocaine dealer, has only one goal – to save enough money for his terminally ill sister’s care. When a blast from his past, Ralph, makes him an offer he can’t refuse, he ignores his gut feeling and takes on a dubious medical trial. This, in exchange for a chance to keep all the profits from the sale of a synthetic type of cocaine. But when things start going wrong, will Eddy care enough to put a stop to the trial? And what really lies behind the secretive medical firm producing these drugs?

Here is an excerpt from No Cure for Fear:

Chapter 16

Dr Ripley knew she had to give him something to chew on, open a window of information.  A window that only showed what the owner wanted others to see, a set piece, like an art installation.  The house remained locked and the key, well she knew its location but the man currently scolding her over the phone had it very much in a firm grip.
‘Sir I made a decision based on the situation.  He was in here demanding info.  I had to give him something, he’s so volatile he would’ve walked for certain!’
‘You did not have to give him anything!  Don’t you understand how this works Andrea?!  I tell you what to say and to whom.  If you can be intimidated by a jumped up junior lab assistant, then I really overestimated your character.  Maybe you aren’t the right person for the job after all.’
Dr Ripley resented that last comment and felt a spark of anger ignite in her. 
‘With all due respect, Sir, did it ever occur to you that I did it to gain his trust, share something with him so that he feels a sense of affinity and responsibility to me?  To MEDiChem?  You say I have a lot to lose, but so does he and everyone else involved in this.’  She’d never spoken to him like that before and felt a flutter of nerves, but it needed to be said.  It was a long time before he spoke again.
‘Do I have to remind you for whom you work for?’ he said calmly.
‘No Sir, you do not.’
‘And you are fully aware what is at stake here?’
‘Yes I do and I know that the potential gain far outweighs the risks.  I am aware of that Sir and I'm prepared to take those risks for the greater good, for the organisation.’
‘I see.  And what you told this lab assistant, Ralph was it?’
‘Yes.’
‘Will not affect the trial or the participants’ cooperation?
‘No, I don’t believe it will.’  She hesitated a moment then spoke again, figuring she might as well be upfront.
‘I told him that there had been some side effects for some of the participants in the US trial.  Auditory disturbances, but not what their fates had been.’
‘Yes, that would not have been wise.  The one that is still alive continues to rave about mind control drugs but the nurses have him mostly sedated, the episodes are becoming less frequent.’  He exhaled deeply.  Dr Ripley pictured an expensive cigar between his chunky fingers.  ‘We cannot afford for this to happen again.  The sample needs to be one consisting of citizens that will not be missed should something happen.’
‘I know Sir, I know.  And it is.  This is why I chose Ralph.  The full history check revealed his acquaintance and their connections.  Coupled with his shady past, he’s perfect.  He will get the job done, of that I am confident.’
‘OK, Andrea…just one more thing.  Does he know anything about the other drug? Or the organisation, who we work for?’
‘Of course not Sir!’ she couldn’t believe he would even ask.  ‘I thought you knew me better than that’.
‘I don’t even know myself, Andrea, especially when it comes to large sums of money.  I’ll be in touch.  Don’t say anything else, to anyone.’
‘I won’t Sir, goodbye.’
She hung up the receiver and leant back in her swivel chair, hands clasped behind her head.  That was intense.  She exhaled deeply through pursed lips and looked at the busy lab beyond her office doors.  From her desk, she could see Ralph, currently at his computer, typing furiously and looking up every now and again.  He looked directly at her and gave her an awkward smile looking from side to side as he did.  He really is an odd person.  She raised her head ever so slightly to acknowledge the exchange and quickly averted her gaze to her monitor, distracted by a ping from her computer.  Yet another inane email. 
Frustrated she stood up from her chair and walked her long, slim, legs across the office and flicked the blinds so that she could have some privacy.  The filing cabinet she kept permanently shut was to her left and the only key to it was, as always, in a custom stitched pocket on her suspender belt.  A rush of adrenaline surged through her, as it always did whenever she accessed this cabinet.  The truth that lay within it was hers to know only, which only fuelled her haughty demeanour.  Even though she was totally fully up to speed with the finer details of the trial, she needed to feel the emblem stamped on the file.  The idiosyncrasy of this ritual was for her enjoyment only.  She removed it from the hanging folder, closed and locked the cabinet, returning the key to its rightful place and sat back down.  Closing her eyes, she rested her hand on the file, tracing her finger around the emblem; the crown, the eagle, the swords and finally the anchor before opening her dark brown eyes to gaze upon the logo itself.  Reading the accompanying words moved her in a way she would not ever confess to anyone.
TOP SECRET. BY ORDER OF HER MAJESTY’s GOVERNMENT.
Her future lay before her in the form of an assignment.  This assignment.  One that would make her very powerful indeed.

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If you enjoyed this excerpt, why not check out the rest of the book?
 (And if you’re “thinking about it,” maybe this review that Lyrical Pens pulled from Amazon will help: “No Cure for Fear was amazing! It was gripping, exciting, edge-of-your-seat action... I don't normally read medical thrillers, but I'm glad I made the exception for this one.”)

No Cure for Fear is currently on Amazon for only £0.99/$0.99 or FREE on Kindle Unlimited.

Twitter: @miriamaaverna

cj Sez: Thanks, Miriam, for sharing that excerpt. The story indeed does sound like a thriller. Okay, that’s it for today. You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. And, if you’ve got a moment, I’m sure Miriam would like to hear from you, so drop her a comment, and when you read the book, an Amazon review would be nice. 
Coming 2017—“Bad Day at Round Rock” a short story in The Posse
a Western anthology of tales of action, romance, mystery, myth, and truth.   

Saturday, January 28, 2017

Mystery Thriller Week on tap . . .

cj Sez: The days are counting down to the start of an annual event: Mystery Thriller Week on Facebook. 
My books are in there somewhere.
I became a charter member of this international group of more than 200 and have been caught up in a whirlwind of activities ever since. 


Vicki Turner Goodwin is a tireless cheerleader/coordinator/chief-cook-and-bottle-washer of MTW, and if you need more information on the event, I’ll let Vicki introduce you: “Mystery Thriller Week is 11 days in February, bringing together authors, blogger, experts, narrators, and fans. Come experience the international mystery and thriller event of the year. Coming Feb. 12-22, 2017.” 


Launching on February 12 and running 24 hours a day until midnight February 22 is a Live, Interactive Author Spotlight event. I’ll be hosting three of the MTW meet-greet-swag-giveaway times on the MTW Facebook page. Stop by, say “hi” and enter your name to win a surprise. Follow your favorite authors or stop by the page anytime and an author will be there to greet you. My times are:

February 15 from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m.
February 18 from 6:30 p.m. to 7 p.m.
February 20 from 10 a.m. to 11 a.m. (happy birthday to me!)

As Lyrical Pens has been doing for the past several weeks, the upcoming series of posts will feature and maybe introduce Mystery Thriller Week authors:

Robbie Cheadle on January 30,
Miriam A. Averna on February 1,
Damon Wakes on February 3,
E. Michael Helms on February 6. 

On February 7, I’ll be a guest on Mysteristas blog (https://mysteristas.wordpress.com/ )

Lyrical Pens will publish some book reviews as well.
 
Okay, I think I’ve covered everything for the next couple of weeks. If you’re as busy as I am (and I just know you are), you might want to print this page and keep it handy so you don’t forget. I know I will…print or forget. (sigh) You-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same.     PS: Sign-ups for a quarterly newsletter happily and gratefully accepted at cjpetterson@gmail.com

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Coming in mid-February 2017—“Bad Day at Round Rock” a short story in  The Posse, a Western anthology of tales of action, romance, myth and truth.   

Wednesday, November 9, 2016

Editing out the gremlins



cj Sez: How many times have you edited your work, over and over again, only to find another mistake glaring at you from the pages of what you thought was your final edit? Today’s Lyrical Pens guest Judy Penz Sheluk posts her thoughts on the subject. She’s a bona fide, wage-earning editor, so be reassured that, yes, it happens to everybody. Read on:

Judy Says: In my day job, I’m the Senior Editor of New England Antiques Journal, so you’d think that I’d be able to find every single mistake in my own work. And the truth is, I do tend to write “clean,” at least when it comes to spelling, punctuation and grammar. I’m even okay with finding the spots where I’ve inexplicably changed my protagonist’s eyes from brown to green or the antagonist’s body type from slim to stout. But it’s what I like to call the “niggly” stuff that most authors, myself included, have the hardest time finding— not because we don’t want to, but because we’ve written multiple drafts, and read and reread our work so many times.

Here are some examples, found in my “final” draft of my new release, SKELETONS IN THE ATTIC (rest assured, these have been corrected!):

Misty Rivers, psychic to Callie Barnstable, protagonist: “I’ll leave you my card. Please call me if you find yourself needing any assistance, any assistance at all. And thank you for the tea and cookies.”
Editor: The tea was never poured. [Impressive catch]

Callie Barnstable to Royce Ashford, contractor/next-door neighbor/possible love interest: “I really like the way you knocked down that wall in your house.”
Editor: When was she in his house? [Answer: in a previous draft, but certainly not in this one]

Callie: I stopped my Garmin and closed my eyes, trying to remember standing there.
Editor: What’s a Garmin? [Answer: a GPS for running that shows pace/time/mileage etc. When you’re into a sport (I’m a runner), you assume everyone in the world knows the lingo. Bad assumption. I changed it to my GPS wristwatch.]

Does this mean that every single mistake is caught before publication? I wish I could say yes, but the reality is even after beta readers, professional editors, and proofreaders, the odd crazy thing happens. In Skeletons, there’s mention of a “t-shit.” Yes, somehow that slid past countless pairs of eyes and spell checks. It’s almost as if “t-shit” found its way in there on its own after everyone had done their job (something we in the industry like to call “gremlins.”) However, because of the cost and time involved, most publishers have a “rule” that there has to be a specific number (which can vary by publisher) of significant errors before the book is pulled and corrected.

Here’s an interesting blog by professional editor Arlene Prunkl that addresses this very subject: http://penultimateword.com/editing-blogs/when-editors-make-mistakes/

Have you found errors in books before, and did they make you laugh, cry, care less or cringe?

SKELETONS IN THE ATTIC
What goes on behind closed doors doesn’t always stay there…

Calamity (Callie) Barnstable isn’t surprised to learn she’s the sole beneficiary of her late father’s estate, though she is shocked to discover she has inherited a house in the town of Marketville—a house she didn’t know existed. However, there are conditions attached to Callie’s inheritance: she must move to Marketville, live in the house, and solve her mother’s murder.

Callie’s not keen on dredging up a thirty-year-old mystery, but if she doesn’t do it, there’s a scheming psychic named Misty Rivers who is more than happy to expose the Barnstable family secrets. Determined to thwart Misty and fulfill her father’s wishes, Callie accepts the challenge. But is she ready to face the skeletons hidden in the attic?

Excerpt
   Leith Hampton placed the will in front of him, smoothing an invisible crease with a well-manicured hand, the nails showing evidence of a vigorous buffing. I wondered what kind of man went in for a mani-pedi—I was surmising on the pedi—and decided it was the kind of man who billed his services out for five hundred dollars an hour.
   He cleared his throat and stared at me with those intense blue eyes. “Are you sure you’re ready, Calamity? I know how close you were to your father.”
   I flinched at the Calamity. Folks called me Callie or they didn’t call me at all. Only my dad had been allowed to call me Calamity, and even then only when he was seriously annoyed with me, and never in public. It was a deal we’d made back in elementary school. Kids can be cruel enough without the added incentive of a name like Calamity.
As for being ready, I’d been ready for the past ninety-plus minutes. I’d been ready since I first got the call telling me my father had been involved in an unfortunate occupational accident. That’s how the detached voice on the other end of the phone had put it. An unfortunate occupational accident.
   I knew at some point I’d have to face the fact that my dad wasn’t coming back, that we’d never again argue over politics or share a laugh while watching an episode of The Big Bang Theory. Knew that one day I’d sit down and have a good long cry, but right now wasn’t the time, and this certainly wasn’t the place. I’d long ago learned to store my feelings into carefully constructed compartments. I leveled Leith with a dry-eyed stare and nodded.
   “I’m ready.”

Judy Penz Sheluk’s debut mystery novel, The Hanged Man’s Noose, was published in July 2015. Skeletons in the Attic, the first book in her Marketville Mystery Series, was published in August 2016.

Her short crime fiction appears in World Enough and Crime, The Whole She-Bang 2, Flash and Bang and Live Free or Tri. She is a member of Sisters in Crime, Crime Writers of Canada, International Thriller Writers and the Short Mystery Fiction Society.

Find Judy on her website/blog at www.judypenzsheluk.com, where she interviews other authors and blogs about the writing life.

Find Skeletons in the Attic: http://www.imajinbooks.com/skeletons-in-the-attic

cj Sez: Gremlins are a special curse for me. I’ve usually got the manuscript open on the computer and correcting things as the pages roll out of the printer. Great excerpt from Skeletons in the Attic; sounds like a marvelous read. Best wishes for great sales and marvelous reviews…and thanks so much for the post. And readers, tell us about the gremlins that haunt you.

Okay, you-all guys keep on keeping on, and I’ll try to do the same. I do want to pass along the good news that publisher Crimson Romance has included DEADLY STAR in their California Kisses bundle, slated to release on January 30. The bundle of TEN romance novels is priced at .99 cents and will remain on sale for a minimum of six months. Watch for it, and of course, I’ll be reminding you.

In the meantime . . . CHOOSING CARTER is part of a thoughtful and frugal holiday gift idea: More Than Friends”is a bundle of six novels offered by Crimson Romance on Amazon. For 99 cents, you can buy hours and hours of reading enjoyment for yourself, a BFF, or a grab-bag party gift. Check it out at…   http://amzn.to/2dnqnLJ

Think of it . . . a purchase now, a purchase later, and you can own sixteen romance novels for about two bucks. Can we say, "Super bargain?"

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